N.I.C.E. Writing

 N.I.C.E. Writing

No confusing areas

Is it interesting?

Change any unnecessary parts

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Wrong:

Abby was playing at recess and saw a lonly person and was not not kind.

She wanted to help the person so she asked if she could play with them.

The person said yes and lived happily ever after.

Corrections:

Abby was playing at recess and saw a lonly person and was not not kind. 

She wanted to help the person so she asked if she could play with them.

The person said yes and lived happily ever after.

‎  ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ =spelling mistake (E)

‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ =confusing part (N)

RED=unnecessary part(C)

ITALIC=Change (E)

Correct:

Abby was playing at recess and saw a lonely person. She was very kind, and

wanted to help the person so she asked if she wanted to play with them.

The person said yes and played happily.

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